My updated double page spread

This is my updated double page spread. I like it better than the original one I produced as it looks more professional however I am not fully satisfied with it. There is nothing in specific that I do not like about it, I just think that overall it could be improved. However, after feedback, it was suggested that I return to my original dps and make some tweaks to it.

This is my original dps with the additions that I made to it.